will christopher you make me chrome. the void swells around me and i cannot get enough. hypnotized, streets become beats and i am phineas moon jude and myself with a concentration like steel. your words feed me.
--jl
03/21 |
I think i still didn't get, whats the Idea of your paragraph, but actually it's a good artickle
--seno
05/01 |
enjoyed reading mr. baer's new work. patrick mcnamara, memphis.
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03/16 |
Hello. I'm from México. My name is Jaime Mesa and im interested about some articles and fictions. I have a culture magazine here. Then i like to know the e-mail or the way to contact with the autor.
By the way i tell you that i like so much the site. Is wonderful.
My e-mail is: hideaway84@hotmail.com
Thanksssss
--jm
03/09 |
Beautiful, to the point, and ever so subtly erotic. i say thank you, everyone i love will be reading this.
--jrc
03/04 |
I liked the dialog between the characters. Light and with an occassional twist to keep the readers attention.
Very enjoyable.
--pca
03/03 |
that was a potent piece. one of my favorites. original. a bit forlorn, but beautiful. blue eyes always get to me.
--CHB
02/29 |
Didja like that?
Then goto the video store and rent Lost Highway or Naked or Crash or Henry Fool.
Or even Kids.
--lian
02/29 |
Been there - done that, except I never had a collie named Jenny. It's probably true for most men. When it goes on and on women tend to get lost in themselves. I'm sure it's fun for them but we're left to pump away alone, and get bored. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who's mind drifts from time to time.
doctor
--dh
02/29 |
Wow...I know that blue.
--al
02/29 |
Damn...
--pt
02/29 |
I liked it.
--kh
02/29 |
Very nice piece of work. Really touching and describing a certain vast loneliness. Well done
--JH
02/29 |
more sex less talk
--jar
02/29 |
Disconnection during a moment of ultimate intimacy. The writer weaves a wonderful mixture of eroticism and sad failure.
--jr
02/29 |
The senses aroused by all that figurative writing is erotic and extremely poetic, excellent use of modern slang. You feel like you're watching the event with extreme suspense rushing through your veins, arousing your heart and forcing it to pump faster and faster until climax, just like in the poem.
--MEC
02/29 |
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