this is screwed up.
--mm
07/05 |
IT;S NOT TRUE SHE DIED FROM TOO MUCH DRUG ROUGH SEX THAT SHE CANNOT HANDLE
--XX
06/27 |
Very moving. Good work.
--JP
04/05 |
You gave a hardened, old cynic pause for the first time in a while. Excellent words, wonderful feelings.
--klr
03/03 |
good sweet jeebus...i just read that story and it literally kicked my ass. i felt out of breath (those magnificently long sentences helped) by the end, heart racing, and head spinning as if i'd just been told the answer to some very important question. quality stuff.
--kmh
02/14 |
it was yes crazy that all
i can say
--tt
02/11 |
i'm impressed, and the style of writing was original. it was erotic and passionate and sensitive. i'd look for more by this author, definately.
--ef
02/04 |
I really loved this short story. I love how it was written, the rhythm of the words.
Good, good stuff.
--djg
02/03 |
That was just beautiful... Thank you for writing it down.
--SCW
02/02 |
Very beautiful, the last paragraph. The rest of it I found a bit alarming. Certainly interesting, though.
--ELM
02/02 |
Susan, I used to read Reverse Cowgirl. I think all the writing you have done has polished your style. Very good short story.
--mhd
01/31 |
havent read a short story as poetic or beautiful in a long time - somewhere between 'everything is illuminated' and anything by p. neruda. good luck. liam_94609@yahoo.com
--lc
01/29 |
This author works for Playboy? Something doesn't add up...
--m
01/29 |
Wow. Best short story I've read in a long, long time.
--PCI
01/28 |
this was quite beautiful. very well done!
--LW
01/28 |
Wow, this is great, really. I used to read Invisible Cowgirl and I must admit I was pretty skeptical of the "you're a bad man aren't you" book, but this is great writing. Touching content too.
--NK
01/28 |
Im speechless! Oh wow, this is amazing its full of color and expression and life!!!!!!!!!!
--mr
01/28 |
What marvellous musings about life and living. A thing of beauty. Thank you for this gift.
--MR
01/28 |
poignant.
--jmj
01/28 |
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