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Reader Feedback on "Some Men Don't "
Ms.Ana,
If you change the gender in your,Some Men Don't, to Some Women Don't, I would be you mirror image.
Claudio Castillo
--CC
10/09 |
Ms. Ana '
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10/09 |
Slick but interesting. Similes forced, as if we will not believe it if it's not a spectacular comparison, the snow faling, reclaiming her soul bit by bit. But all in all the excerpt merits continuing.
--From
06/14 |
Ana, can you really do the lambada or are you just big on night stands ?
--Žr
08/09 |
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