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Reader Feedback on "One, Two"
I like this one quite a lot. In my mind ambiguity=magic. It seems to me that definitions like straight/gay, healthy/unhealthy, are unrealistic and potentially harmful to individuality and expression. This piece is also well-crafted, and I found the dillema (the protagonist's fantasizing about an egg mcmuffin, while engaged in what many would consider a fantasy) to be very funny. I've seen ass and I've seen egg mcmuffins, but the author describes the latter so beautifully (and, to me, hilariously) that I had a distinct and not unpleasant olfactory memory, from the days when I wasn't so prudish when it came to my diet. Anyhow, good stuff.
--ii
06/29 |
I love this piece -- simultaneously hot and funny. Have to get the book...
--JR
06/06 |
First piece on Nerve I've identified with
--cc
06/02 |
EXCELLENT!!!
--EM
06/02 |
I'm starting to have a hard time telling this week's fiction pieces apart.
--TJ
06/02 |
very good. another book for me to read
--jbh
06/02 |
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