awesome story and the dialogue and communication between the two characters is real and authentic
to boot. The story works for me when I can put myself in the story and can see the charcters
and can see what is going on. That's what I got here. Good work. Different and excitingly
unorignal.
shane
--S.A
01/25 |
Hysterical and real and, ultimately, touching. I'm SO glad I stumbled upon this story, and can't wait to find more work by this writer on your site. Thanks!
--BR
06/20 |
Groovy. Very groovy. And all too typical.
--DT
05/23 |
wow! that was one hell of a spare, sad, sexy snapshot. you've come a long way, a.h.
--bjd
05/01 |
What a beautiful story. I am a girl and sex between men does not turn me on. But this was excellent. Thank you.
--kat
05/01 |
Interesting. I liked it, but it repulsed me at the same time.
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04/29 |
I liked that. Thank you.
--ksk
04/27 |
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