Ends with a bang. 1111
--JB
10/24 |
That's an awesomely creepy cracked out story. I've always known that real life is stranger than fiction and this story validates my theory. +1 for living on the edge on insanity; I would have let the crackhead stay, but would have tied her up first -- I've always known that there was good reason to keep the odd assortment of duct tape and bungee cords on hand at all times.
--LM
05/06 |
Fantastic story!
--twa
06/03 |
Really good. It vividly portrays the E/sex experience which many writers fail to depict accurately.
--PK
06/02 |
I don't think I would have gotten the story if I hadn't done E before. I felt like I was actually in the story becuase you were able to vividly portray that E induced high and then that low that always follows for the following weeks. That low never seems to rise again to baseline, but rather takes a chunk out of your seratonin that you can never seem to recover.
--JS
05/29 |
wow, how incredibly sad. that's all i can really muster to say. bravo.
--Lu
05/29 |
Really a great story --
captures "that moment", after which, things betwen me and her are entirely different, and entirely, longingly, dead. That moment is devistating and imperceptible but I will always remember it.
--NK
05/29 |
That's such a sad story. Funny how drug-buddies never seem to keep in touch with each other...
--ab
05/29 |
It's trite, it's pat--but it's about drugs, and drugs are cool and hip! Sheesh--and this is another one of those guys who's supposed to be the greatest voice of our generation??
--BB
05/29 |
ouch.
maybe the ending spelled it out a little too much, but apart from that, ouch..
--eva
05/29 |
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