Suxors.
--ASD
11/22 |
Got to agree that the story was a a sleeper. I wanted to root for you, but all the sexual insecurity made you seem like too much of a pussy. I guess that's why women love this story, and men find it annoying.
--NM
05/02 |
i enjoyed reading your story. it reminded me of myself during my college years. quite a laugh. denny
--dll
04/12 |
i wonder if a big story about a braggart is just a cover for smallcockitis. kinda like a big truck and a redneck.
--GC
04/06 |
Benjamin Cavell:
Your story was wonderfully written, though tragic in its statement of your malicious deeds. Your style captures the reader; I found myself very drawn into the story, and really mades me want more. I can't wait to read your book. Good luck on your future endeavors.
Joshua B.
jnb787@jwu.edu
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04/04 |
This story lacked, I'm sorry to say. I usually love Nerve's selections, but this one revealed immature writing, a tired plot, and no edge.
--MJ
04/03 |
holy crap!! this is hilarious! i loved reading every word of it. i am not even a dude and felt i could identify with this story. AWESOME!
--ts
04/03 |
Some of these feedback senders are just plain mean. This story was fun, and I had a good time reading it, and then the autors pic at the bottom made it even more enjoyable. Damn.
--GDE
04/02 |
if you can make a woman cum 8 or 9 times in one night....then one of you is lying. Loved the story though
--ml
04/02 |
I agree..the last sentence is great.
--Kali
04/02 |
Yawn. Went on way too long. Navel-gazing? Dick-gazing.
--cc
04/01 |
It reads like a conversation with a 19 year old boy. I'm not even sure what was his point.
--ESC
04/01 |
now this is more like the writing i expect to read on Nerve. more from this type of literature.
i'd like to see more from this writer, based on this story.
--bbbb
04/01 |
just fucking Wow! I loved it. The last sentence made it.
--JCL
04/01 |
Enjoyed it.... thanks.
--EM
04/01 |
"Lots of women couldn't have them when they were in their teens and then there was some small, unfortunate set of women who couldn't have them ever."
These are the sentences that lacerate those of us small, unfortunate set of women. You just trip across them everywhere.
--EJP
04/01 |
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