You are an excellent writer. Regardless of the content, you have a way with words. I'm truly captivated. Ever thought about writing a novel? I've been trying for years to have my sentences flow off of one anther the way you have so effortlessly. WOW. I commend you endlessly.
P.S
Please write a book.
--NB
01/20 |
He must have been smoking his friends good pot when he wrote this story because I was trying to figure out if he ever even fucked the girl. I see writing good english wasn't his major in high school.
--jh
12/22 |
Wow what a way to look at it but you are right you are a shit. Be honest! You should have told him and whatever would have happened should have happen! What happended to HONESTY in this world. You should have gone for what you wanted!
--J.M.
12/18 |
Sam - you were getting some pussy? Are you writing or being real? I know who you are and I didn't get pussy even when my sisters were the hotties of town. (me being a hottie chick myself)
That's the genius of the written word. If it's in black and white it could be real Contender!
--AA
12/08 |
I think it's fucking brilliant. Almost as good as the last time Nerve published it. Hey, do I get paid again?
--SL
12/04 |
why would he use hair gel as lube?????
--ga
12/03 |
i think he shouldnt be having sex anyways at that age!!!!!!!!
--am
12/03 |
i think he shouldnt be having sex anyways at that age!!!!!!!!
--am
12/03 |
I read this story (fragment?) a while back, and loved it. I could never quite remember where I saw it, but it stuck on my mind. It's got a lot of humanity, and personally, I really enjoyed his style.
--JB
12/03 |
Nerve? This writing surely isn't up to your standards? A mistake maybe? The sentiment is Nerve, but the writing! Blech!
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12/02 |
That was almost unreadable. If there had been another page I wouldn't have clicked 'Next'.
--AS
12/02 |
good idea - acceptable delivery but had the makings of something very special - another three runs through the editing process would have helped a lot - promise but fails to deliver the goods
--gwb
12/02 |
booooring- i fucked my best friend AND his girlfriend at the SAME TIME- think about it
--IB
12/01 |
That was a pretty lame and shoddy story. He wasn't even able to jetison the other guy and score with both betties. When was holding someone else hand during sex such a sin?
--es
11/29 |
any sacrifice is worth the risk of "telling" your little secrets. Not a bad little tale of naughtiness.
Nevertheless, being the 'best friend' I would have ended up kicking this guy's ass for his lack of honesty.
--rd
11/29 |
I thought we would never mention this agian. It is not right to shove it in the faces of our past lovers.
--JH
11/28 |
doesn't seem finished
--j
11/28 |
That conjures up one very hot,erotic picture in my mind! Awesome story!
--dw
11/28 |
Wow dude that was fucking crazy
--GZK
11/28 |
This was one of the worst pieces I've ever read on nerve. It was poorly written and stupid. What a waste of five minutes. Please don't post crap like this again. Sam, I know you can do better than this.
--jzr
11/28 |
Nice, I have had similar experiences. Meaningful for growing up and dreadful on friendships of the young.
--TJ
11/28 |
I've been friends with my best guy friend since we were babies. My 1st cousin moved out to my town, and she like my best friend's brother. Now I've never been close with my cousin but I've very close to her sister. So one day I was talking to her sister and I told her I liked my best friend. I have this strong my cousin heard because the next day she claimed that she liked him and next thing I know she's dating him. I hate her for it. And sometimes I can't help but be mad at him but it's not his fault, I wasn't honest with him. But he wants me to hang out with them and I don't know what do. I wanna cry sometimes. What should I do?
--KH
10/03 |
just amazing. one of the best short stories i've ever read. really. i mean, fuck, that was beautiful.
--mls
04/19 |
How many of us haven't coveted another's ? When he reaches out for her hand, and she responds in kind, don't we all get that way-down-deep tickle, that inner sigh of relief and fulfillment. And better yet, an encounter without guilt, without remorse. We should be so lucky.
--JMC
04/29 |
karma worked fast there.
the author is a pathetic tube sock lovin' jerk.
--jv
04/28 |
What a truely erotic tale and a treasured memory of sexual bliss
--SBD
04/09 |
wow
--rc
04/07 |
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