Yes, please do read Song of Songs in the Bible. The most amazing thing that the Right ever did was convince us that the Bible belonged to them. It doesn't. The most amazing thing the Left ever did was to believe the Right in this regard. Read it, all of it, you just might be suprised.
--AFD
06/17 |
Thanks for the subtil, thoughtful and kind steps. Your guide is inspiring and so good to read at!
--hm
06/09 |
I must say I have been trying my hand with sex scenes with no real satisfaction. A member of a writing group sent me a link to this site. I must say that now I can see my mistakes. This has been a great experiance and a big help thanks for offering suggestions. I sometimes find it very hard to take all the aspects of a situation into consideration. I hope that I can now go back and perfect my work and make it some thing people will enjoy reading.
--M.O.
06/09 |
LMAO@step 9...oh you poor guy..LOL..and it's kind of funny with the women saying that they're great fakers ot that they think we think we can just stick it in and WHAMO..lol..it's not even like that..I'm not saying that I'm good at all, in fact I like to think of myself as modest but I have NO problems making women cum. No they weren't faking, sure its always possible somewhere along the lines but you can tell when a women is REALLY cumming, in fact I've given a few women their first squirting experience and that you can't fake sooooo just keep plugging along (pardon the pun..lol)
--Beef
05/30 |
Excellent and very tastefully done article. As a new erotica writer I appreciated the candor and truth in your article.Thanks - from a woman's point of view.
--BAW
05/29 |
Ha ha! Clever and funny, and I'll be taking at least some of your advice. I hope those people who always post in the comments section to describe what their 'throbbing hardness' did to some 'horny slut's' 'dripping wet lips' back in the 70's do too. And regarding, "guess what it happens to me all the time and no they are not faking it" I bet they are.
--AR
05/23 |
I wish you would write my boyfriend and tell him he can't just stick his dick in me and *KABANG* get me off. He seems to think it's a personal affront to his manhood!
--BB
05/23 |
Hellooo, EGM,
I guess I'd have to say that seeing is believing. Don't know what you've got darlin, but I've been a woman a long, long time, and can tell ya, we're great fakers, and "it don't come easy!"
(No offense, I really hope you are as great as you think you are, if so would love to meet you!)
--YES
05/22 |
Mon amour,
Thanks for the hot hot tips. Now it's back to the drawing board.
Laura Dunne
--ld
05/22 |
Maybe if I'd broken more rules than #2, I would have been a finalist. Eh, probably not.
--TJ
05/22 |
Regarding "..I speak here from experience. So please, don't try to sell us on the notion that a man can enter a woman, elicit a shuddering moan or two, and bring her off. ..." ; guess what it happens to me all the time and no they are not faking it ... and no I don't claim to have a huge dick either (though I have been told I am "generous" but I don't think that has anything to do with it). I don't understand why/how but that's the truth. So I think you *can* write about it!
--EGM
05/21 |
this was awesome. funny and dead on
--jd
05/21 |
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