Definitely the sweetest thing I've seen on Nerve. Not that I'm against hot sweaty fun, but it's endearing to see people that really care about each other getting ready to start lives together. So much optimism!
--KsZ
05/26 |
Dan,
Took some of your feedback and made a change. With this piece I won't be able to make the photos larger without rebuilding the whole presentation but for future presentations that will definitely be taken into account. However, I've built in a position marker which will indicate just where along the presentation you are. Hope you like them!
— Bill
--Bill
05/26 |
This piece is great – touching and sincere. I have a critique, though: I wish it had been set up differently. The picture and text seem kind of squeezed into a small space. I wish on the list of numbers the picture you were looking at had been highlighted so you could more easily go to the next one. Also, the darker pictures next to the regular pictures make it seem like "something dark lurks beneath" or something – ominous in a way, which I don’t think it was the intention. Overall, however, I really liked this. :)
--dan
05/26 |
"Trey" and "Jay Jay" are actually Cari and J.J. Thanks for including us, though.
--cj
05/26 |
I loved this! A great mix of fun photography, stories, and happiness. Good luck, everyone!
----c
05/26 |
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