First three pages were pretty good. The last blew it for me.
Better luck next time.
--CSC
09/10 |
I understood it, including the ending. It was sad, but rang true. I'm actually a Christian dealing with some of these issues, but that being said, I would never put any man through anything akin to that story. I'm either active with a partner, or single and abstinent, so I would never do that to a partner. I really liked your prose, especially your descriptions. I also liked your fresh turns of phrase. I may nick "Joie De Vulva" at some point in the future (only in conversation, mind you, no plagiarizing shall be committed).
--TS
07/18 |
That was pretty silly. Interesting topic, poor delivery. A major disappointment!
--mm
07/12 |
great story
--A.L
07/03 |
Wonderful! Steve Almond makes Nerve worth reading.
--SL
04/04 |
That's a really dumb story -- try something authentic next time!
--bkl
02/26 |
It was brilliant. Except that I didn't get the end. Someone please explain.
--a
12/17 |
steve almond, i love you. this is brilliant.
--ty
12/17 |
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