Good, tight writing which involved me cathartically and humorously--excellent piece. Thanks. --ORM 07/30 |
I really dig the rhythm,or cadence of the writing. Very sexy. Very honest and uncomlpicated. --bzz 07/20 |
good writing. Some very funny stuff in there.
----c 07/19 |
I really liked this story. --twa 07/15 |
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