This one was a favorite of mine. I thought it had style.
--bron
07/18 |
turned me on.
--JM
05/16 |
Boring and amateurish, sorry.
--SA
05/12 |
Powerful, sexy, clever piece of writing.
--SH
05/11 |
very nice! i usually read gay erotica, because hetero is so un-descriptive and un-imaginative. this story was a welcomed change. loved the timing with the 2007 'ball' drop...gave the orgasm more depth. nice anal bit...so the ejaculate is always outside of the cavity these days?
--GB
04/05 |
Some person asked a question (rhetorical, but with an obvious and worthwhile rejoinder nonetheless) and I answered it. I like it when authors engage in conversation about their writing, and I try to do that.
As for the black slip: well, women wear pretty specific things when trying to overtly indicate that they'd like to have sex. It isn't original to have her put on something provocative before meeting a lover at the door, but it's direct and that's what she would do to make him want her more. The male libido is a noncombatant in the war against cliché.
And I made a point of saying that when he goes back a second time and she's not expecting him, she's wearing a ratty bathrobe.
--NA
04/05 |
I approve this sex story. I thought it was funny, direct, and even thematic.
--TL
04/05 |
"Sabina had long dark hair and a figure as tall and appealing as wine being poured."
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04/04 |
Wow, the author posting a rebuttal? How defensive. The point is obviously that her description (“slim”, “almond-shaped” eyes, “perfect ass”) was cliché. And answering the door in a black slip? What, you couldn’t get the cable guy to come by or a roommate to walk out of the shower and ask to join in?
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04/04 |
I used the word "slim" twice in this story.
--NA
04/04 |
thanks, nerve, for finally printing a story that's hot. and the beginning, before the sex, was funny.
--KR
04/04 |
How many times can you describe her as 'slim'?
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04/04 |
You can see what the author was trying to do, but this was an unsuccessful story. It wasn't poignant, or novel, or sexy. The dialogue, especially the female voice, was embarrassing. On the whole, insulting to Nerve readers and a waste of time.
--LM
04/04 |
expertly written - authentic language - good use of the new year countdown
--AK
04/04 |
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