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Glad you finally got to see the place
--CDH
03/25 |
Margot, if only you were here to help me to orgasm when I masturbate to your hot stories! You're a woman who knows how to write a great male fantasy. Thanks and great job!
--NF
02/19 |
This was pretty disapointing and not sexy in the least. Nerve can do much much better.
--SD
02/18 |
i won't pretend to like all the fiction published on nerve, but 99% of the time i can at least recognise its quality. so what the hell is this garbage? is it supposed to be a joke? i've read better fanfic than this. hell, i've read better stuff on *nifty* than this. a trite tale with wooden characterisation and some woefully poor writing:
"The dress was so tight I could not imagine that she had anything on underneath it. Not that I was imagining." yeeeaaaawn.
"The two people responsible for this transformation were so androgynous that I couldn't ascertain their gender" - hmm, yes, well, describing someone as "androgynous" would indicate that they are "neither distinguishably masculine nor feminine, as in dress, appearance, or behavior".
"I looked down at him, riveted by his cock. It was tall, smooth and silky. A supermodel in its own right." oh my.
""I wanna fuck so bad," he said, moving his hips up and down, fucking up into my hand with his cock." *sigh*
"She was carrying a Balenciaga bag and wore jeans with thigh-high, pointy black boots...She looked impossibly elegant at seven o'clock in the morning, way before hair-and-makeup." let the clichés roll!
it was awful. awful!
--:(
02/10 |
This was kind of a professional nod to the masturbating schoolboy 'all growed up' but still doing the same thing and getting paid a fortune to do it. Sign me up!
--TC
02/08 |
This was awful. Truly fucking awful.
--AB
02/07 |
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