this was an extremely amateurish story. --RA 04/12 |
definitely scored with that closing. good tight story. --dwp 10/21 |
Reminds me of my all time favorite band's song:
Wax Gravy by Add N to {x} --mo 10/19 |
Nice.. cool experience --mbs 10/18 |
I liked this one
(probably the first time and only time I've heard a line like "your face smells like pussy") --DM 10/17 |
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