what a gorgeous story. i love how *all* my senses were provoked from the beginning: the taste of the banquet, the chill of the vodka snow, the sounds of the hifi, the smell of burning records... these things pull me into the world and subtlety stimulate my appetite for the sex to come.
--lc
02/18 |
Liked the story a lot. But who are these weirdos using feedback as a forum for their personal sexual fantasies?
--KAC
02/18 |
i hope someone's monitoring these boards. liked a lot of this piece - the time-period details seem more like decoration than a real part of the piece. or it could be something about the era that's it's just a little too close to home.
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02/18 |
Just "cleaned up" after reading Erin Cressida Wilson's incredibly hot piece " White Rabbit." Yowsa is all I gotta say.Refreshingly viseral, well written erotica is rare in our politically correct day and age. Thank god for women for testicles. More pieces like this might prevent me from moving to Europe.Kudos Nerve !
--JM
02/17 |
if you gotta break-up this is the way to do it. i love you Tria.
--jmj
02/17 |
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