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pweh!poigant. and real. i loved it.
--e.s.
09/20
Great story!
--JW
09/07
hm...does more explicit mean more interesting?
--sm
08/15
the general concept's similar. kind of. http://www.freeweb.hu/tchl/salinger/prettymouth.html compare and contrast.At least the chick has evolved from doormat to sex fiend.
--ch
08/08
yep. it was "pretty mouth and green my eyes."
--sm
08/08
i know i've read this story by an american writer from mid-20th century. i think it was j.d. salinger but i'm not sure. the original end is more ambiguious, not so neatly tied up, while the 21st century version is more explicit. can't help but think this writer is paying homage, but "nothing new under the sun" is especially right in this case.
--sm
08/08
"He's got Johnson and Wang ready to go." Indeed.
--JL
08/08
please know that a lot of your recent articles link to "The Girlfriend From Another Planet" when you go to the "print a copy" window. please please fix that. best, ks.
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08/08


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