Very cute story.....have to say that I was waiting for the rest . It seemed to end too soon, like the author was limited to a certain word count and she'd come to end of the count before the end of the story. And why would she hope the day would "never" come that she would be able to pull out that unruly hair? Nevertheless, it seems she got just what she wanted. I'd like to see more of this -- a little longer and more fleshed out with regard to her and Jack's very coincidental meeting.
--dsm
11/14 |
great story, i'm an alien I'll beep my number to you da da
--rk
11/09 |
Forbidden love triumphs again! At least for now....
--JCF
11/08 |
Awesome, awesome story. As a single girl, it makes me very scared.
I'm now wanting to know what they did with anyone who tried but never matched up on their PDI's, because I'm sure I'd be that girl. Internment for me...
--JDR
11/07 |
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