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let's see, Lee is engaged to Yves, who has been to her apartment only once before. Yves departs because he's tired. Lee is unable to share with her friends her engagement to Yves. Lee and Kelly make love after everyone is gone.
Jardine, this was great. --jmj 05/03 |
That is good. The opportunities, the assertion, the basic plan: social, psychological, and economic equals. A mechanic with long red hair and a moustache once said, "You need to write with short sentences." Libaire does this beautifully. --MS 05/03 |
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