I thought this was well written. It kept my interest and his imagination knows no bounds.
I did not find it erotic however, it only reminded me of the old joke that a man spend the first 9 months of his life fighting to get out and the rest of his life tryong to get back in.."
Despite the lack of erotic material-I enjoy well written erotica-i wanted more and hope there will be further chapters.
I also wanted to add that the many little gadgets mentioned added so much ambience to this story.
The little details were gold.
--djs
08/06 |
That cell phone working off of thought thing is creepy. Love the alien sex - captain kirk never got his hole body sucked up inside an alien, which is too bad. good imagination!
--DC
07/17 |
one of the most original stories i've read on your site. love the writer's take on the future, thinking taking the place of speaking, manages to be both orwellian and sexy. a great read!
--cj
06/26 |
Fascinating. Keep up the good work!
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06/26 |
OK Lets go!
--twa
06/25 |
Writer:
Amazing story. REally provacative stuff.
--p
06/23 |
Mr. Lombardi has pulled off a beauty here. I looked his website up and that's some damn funny stuff too. If I weren't an insecure, competitive little prick I'd say he's the real deal. Regardless, I hope y'all enjoyed this as much as I. Who knew a grandson of Vince could be such an aesthete?
--VA
06/23 |
felt like one of those stories that's so vivid it feels like a movie. sex. suspense. sci-fi. can it be a movie?
--f
06/23 |
splendid ... great concept and story, liquor sponsor notwithstanding.
--ted
06/23 |
This is one of the funniest and most memorable stories I've ever read on this site. It's also has a touch of sadness. Great work.
--DJC
06/23 |
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