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Reader Feedback on "Brighton Beach"
Is this about Borot? Worse than the lack of imagination is the triteness of the story--typical of much fiction on Nerve. It's not really even a story. The last sentence is not earned. I could go on, but the hell with it.
--LAT
01/03 |
Raw, sexy, bone scraping imagery. Good read.
--LMR
01/15 |
It's a fairly faithful description of a fairly ok fuck - not tender, not erotic, not even exciting as raw pornography - just something that happens sometimes.
--LF
01/14 |
terrible!
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01/11 |
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