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this first comment gives the excerpt short shrift -- the excerpt nicely communicates the unfurling of a smart young woman's sexuality. its hard not to think about what it would be like to be sexually active young sexual woman as a man, and interestingly the vantage of this woman -- the author is still 27 apparently -- is much like the view a man would take, i think. this could be a sign of the times, or an indication that the author has a pseudonym ;)
--ted
11/08 |
Such practiced blase' ... Not only the type of writing that uses tired words and expressions to describe stale subject matter ("ruptured hearts and hymens," "supple young body," "casualty of marriage," "path of self-discovery"), but also an outdated, madonna kissing girls, brittney kissing girls 'homosuperiority' about it that is simply too predictable to be any bit relevant or have any traction. Congratulations on a snippy piece of crap that young inexperienced girls might find empowering for the wrong reasons and old, seasoned, petophilic dikes might use for masturbation in a pinch. Bravo. This story is unique just like every other snowflake.
--GC
11/08 |
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