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Thank you Margot - I enjoyed your story very much! Very sensual very erotic. Thanks
--AB
05/31
incredibly sexy. how did you know my fantasy?
--s
03/06
i've read it four times came four times...so hot...you were not with a woman though..she's another sex worker
--jcm
02/18
awesome story -- reminds of one I read in the anthology of lesbian erotica -- about the Turkish - I think - woman getting a wax job...leaves me wet and wanting more...
--tb
01/31
do we need a James Frey style investigations of the veracity of this? photographic evidence would be helpful.
--sam
01/31
Just curious . . . whay size tip did you leave? Outstanding story
--JEB
01/30
i call bullshit.
--ab
01/29
Margot should here "irresistable" http://www.myspace.com/eigenzeit
--EZ
01/27
I got a hard on but everything gets me goin
--BS
01/26
That had to be one of the hottest stories Ive ever read!
--RAB
01/26
Margot- I'm a straight guy and that was really hot. :-o
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01/26
nice little Story i like it very much well done
--RZ
01/25
that's the hottest thing i've ever read. ever. i'll take two more please. yaletownboy6@hotmail.com
--sb
01/25
Wondering if I should send to a friend before I visit. Could save some time.
--fe
01/24
Day-um that was very hot. I am a gay man and it even got me going. Does that makes me Strai-curious?
--MT
01/24
Was that fact or fantasy? I'm a guy who waxes and I hope that my female esthetician is equally adventurous as yours on my next visit! That was VERY hot.
--NF
01/23
That was incredibly hot - probably more so than the wax was. Excellent story.
--AS
01/22
This story was forwarded to me by a friend and I am so glad I took the time to read it. I am Middle Eastern and wax is the main process of hair removal for me. I definitely have a different perspective on it now. I am stalling... This story was brilliantly sensual. I got wet just reading it and now more than ever I am bi-curious. Thanks so much for sharing!
--Busa
01/21
I agree with ML. A good hand-job deserves $50-$100. She's a pro! You're a john! This is not sex with a woman. When you looked in her eyes and saw nothing, guys with prostitutes see the same thing. A person disengaged.
--R.K.
01/21
For a welcome change the author tell the tale without the need for the "score" or so-called beauty shot. Mamy of us fantasised this exercise or have experienced it and realize the verity of the story. A fine massage or waxing is about process and being, not arriving, and our author has done the genre a great service. I for one would like to read more of her work.
--IM
01/21
hot
--dcx
01/21
Ms. Berwin, you write, " I had never been with a woman before and I still wasn't sure whether I had." Let me clarify that for you, my dear. You have not "been with a woman". You have been serviced by talented, creative sex worker. Sure hope you gave her a good tip, since she may be working to support her family. PS--double-ouch on the fingernail action. I'd never let a woman with long nails inside me!
--ML
01/20
The bit about the long red fingernail INSERTED was a little hard to believe. OUCH!
--ouch
01/20
One of the hottest essays that I have ever read, extremely well done and erotic.....I want more.....is there a collection of these?
--lf
01/20
this story is sooooo hot. i love it. nicely done.
--rw
01/20
started off as an informative essay, finished with me thinking twice about my one sexuallity. To wax or not to wax
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01/20
That's hot Margot.. no bullshit.
--GC
01/19
I belong to a So Calif nudist resort and one sees all body types including some stunning men and women. Several women have shaved and I could not help noticing. One hot babe has trimmed her pussy into a tiny heart. Hot! Years ago Blacks Beach in San Diego would attract couples-the guy wearing a cock ring and his babe would be hairless. Sometimes one sees a guy with shaved pubes.
--MVD
01/19
is this cosmo or nerve?
--cv
01/19
Just read it a second time wondering if I had just been in the right mood the first time, but nope, just as hot...
--MB
01/19
Well I'm somewhat jaded, after many years of observing the ins and outs of sexual discourse I find myself making significant architectural structure in my pants, really nice piece of work you made there.
--hh
01/19
Hmmm, very sexy, well and simply written, but I'm used to the personal essays here being more like essays and less like erotica. Not that I'm complaining, but I think this one got put into the wrong section.
--kkm
01/18
Fantastic Margot.
--CMS
01/18
that was reeeeally nice.
--sl
01/18
That was hot.
--twa
01/18
oh god. i think i need to go get waxed. or something.... that was amazing.
--ld
01/18
What a bait and switch for the reader. In a very good way...
--EH
01/18
i actually thought i was about to read an essay on waxing. i was taking up time in my boring marriage and family therapy class and all of a sudden, i'm practically coming in my seat. i'm still wet, and trapped in class. screw you guys.
--=(
01/18
that was oddly, surprisingly hot.
--ted
01/18
jesus. most of the erotic essays on this site leave me cold. that was dripping hot.
--sn
01/18
God that was hot. As is she.
--rsk
01/18
I never send fan mail but I got hot reading that and I'm a guy without a girl/girl fetish.
--bm
01/18
hahaha, nice one, kh
--mj
01/18
Now every day can be Fake Memoirist Day!
--kh
01/18


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