Thank you Margot - I enjoyed your story very much! Very sensual very erotic. Thanks --AB 05/31 |
incredibly sexy. how did you know my fantasy? --s 03/06 |
i've read it four times came four times...so hot...you were not with a woman though..she's another sex worker --jcm 02/18 |
awesome story -- reminds of one I read in the anthology of lesbian erotica -- about the Turkish - I think - woman getting a wax job...leaves me wet and wanting more... --tb 01/31 |
do we need a James Frey style investigations of the veracity of this? photographic evidence would be helpful. --sam 01/31 |
Just curious . . . whay size tip did you leave?
Outstanding story --JEB 01/30 |
i call bullshit. --ab 01/29 |
Margot should here "irresistable"
http://www.myspace.com/eigenzeit --EZ 01/27 |
I got a hard on but everything gets me goin --BS 01/26 |
That had to be one of the hottest stories Ive ever read! --RAB 01/26 |
Margot- I'm a straight guy and that was really hot. :-o -- 01/26 |
nice little Story i like it very much
well done --RZ 01/25 |
that's the hottest thing i've ever read.
ever.
i'll take two more please.
yaletownboy6@hotmail.com --sb 01/25 |
Wondering if I should send to a friend before I visit. Could save some time. --fe 01/24 |
Day-um that was very hot. I am a gay man and it even got me going. Does that makes me Strai-curious? --MT 01/24 |
Was that fact or fantasy? I'm a guy who waxes and I hope that my female esthetician is equally adventurous as yours on my next visit! That was VERY hot. --NF 01/23 |
That was incredibly hot - probably more so than the wax was. Excellent story. --AS 01/22 |
This story was forwarded to me by a friend and I am so glad I took the time to read it. I am Middle Eastern and wax is the main process of hair removal for me. I definitely have a different perspective on it now. I am stalling... This story was brilliantly sensual. I got wet just reading it and now more than ever I am bi-curious. Thanks so much for sharing! --Busa 01/21 |
I agree with ML. A good hand-job deserves $50-$100. She's a pro! You're a john! This is not sex with a woman. When you looked in her eyes and saw nothing, guys with prostitutes see the same thing. A person disengaged. --R.K. 01/21 |
For a welcome change the author tell the tale without the need for the "score" or so-called beauty shot. Mamy of us fantasised this exercise or have experienced it and realize the verity of the story. A fine massage or waxing is about process and being, not arriving, and our author has done the genre a great service. I for one would like to read more of her work. --IM 01/21 |
hot --dcx 01/21 |
Ms. Berwin, you write, " I had never been with a woman before and I still wasn't sure whether I had."
Let me clarify that for you, my dear. You have not "been with a woman". You have been serviced by talented, creative sex worker. Sure hope you gave her a good tip, since she may be working to support her family.
PS--double-ouch on the fingernail action. I'd never let a woman with long nails inside me! --ML 01/20 |
The bit about the long red fingernail INSERTED was a little hard to believe. OUCH! --ouch 01/20 |
One of the hottest essays that I have ever read, extremely well done and erotic.....I want more.....is there a collection of these?
--lf 01/20 |
this story is sooooo hot. i love it. nicely done. --rw 01/20 |
started off as an informative essay, finished with me thinking twice about my one sexuallity. To wax or not to wax --; ] 01/20 |
That's hot Margot.. no bullshit. --GC 01/19 |
I belong to a So Calif nudist resort and one sees all body types including some stunning men and women. Several women have shaved and I could not help noticing. One hot babe has trimmed her pussy into a tiny heart. Hot! Years ago Blacks Beach in San Diego would attract couples-the guy wearing a cock ring and his babe would be hairless. Sometimes one sees a guy with shaved pubes. --MVD 01/19 |
is this cosmo or nerve? --cv 01/19 |
Just read it a second time wondering if I had just been in the right mood the first time, but nope, just as hot... --MB 01/19 |
Well I'm somewhat jaded, after many years of observing the ins and outs of sexual discourse I find myself making significant architectural structure in my pants, really nice piece of work you made there. --hh 01/19 |
Hmmm, very sexy, well and simply written, but I'm used to the personal essays here being more like essays and less like erotica. Not that I'm complaining, but I think this one got put into the wrong section. --kkm 01/18 |
Fantastic Margot. --CMS 01/18 |
that was reeeeally nice. --sl 01/18 |
That was hot. --twa 01/18 |
oh god. i think i need to go get waxed. or something....
that was amazing. --ld 01/18 |
What a bait and switch for the reader. In a very good way... --EH 01/18 |
i actually thought i was about to read an essay on waxing. i was taking up time in my boring marriage and family therapy class and all of a sudden, i'm practically coming in my seat. i'm still wet, and trapped in class. screw you guys. --=( 01/18 |
that was oddly, surprisingly hot. --ted 01/18 |
jesus. most of the erotic essays on this site leave me cold.
that was dripping hot. --sn 01/18 |
God that was hot. As is she. --rsk 01/18 |
I never send fan mail but I got hot reading that and I'm a guy without a girl/girl fetish. --bm 01/18 |
hahaha, nice one, kh --mj 01/18 |
Now every day can be Fake Memoirist Day! --kh 01/18 |
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