POETRY

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Gee wilikers. Perhaps you were starving for good sex.
--MG
04/28

citrusy good (orange slice, opening lines) Thanks to the editors for a fine choice.
--PK
02/27

YEAH! Now THAT's a POEM!
--jp
11/22

awesome poem...just like you were there...nice work
--cf
11/18

Thanks for great visualization. I'm so looking forward to my next hot lunch - mmmmmmmmmm.
--jsp
11/18

Thanks for great visualization. I'm so looking for to my next hot lunch - mmmmmmmmmm.
--jsp
11/18

Love it! Loveit! Love it! are you pulished? where can I get more of your unique style? nadiyahsdelights@aol.com
--N.D
11/06

Love it! Love it! Lov it!
--N.D
11/06

that was nice.
--mtr
11/05

That was absolutely beautiful!!!
--EL
10/29

i have to admit that i read your poem with much skepticism--i mean, the rest of this site reeks of cheese, why not this poem? i was pleasantly surprised, however. excellent job. i especially like how tensely you hold the images of food--everything strung on a line in order; defintely drives the hunger theme home. anywhere else you publish? my best,
--MB
10/03

Hey, this is great -- really good. Thank you.
--MC
10/03

Well, that was one hot lunch!! When can I have one?
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09/17

its such a beautiful cricket chirping september day i thought hot lunch was very apropo poets seldom get the feedback they deserve or the feedback they want so i giveth to youeth those sort of sentiments at this time
--cfs
09/06

the images of the traffic swelling and the cherry tree burning in the sun are so perfect for the mood, I just love this piece. where can I read more of your work? phthalo42@yahoo
--PB
07/28

WoW! If only we could all have lunch breaks like that, no one would mind going to work. It's really well written , enjoyed it. JL
--JL
07/28

Thought this to be very HOT,as my body loves it alot.
--me
07/24

As hot as a mid day fuck.
--ac02
07/12

I hum in the afterglow by the microwaves green light touching bruised skin blotches of rose red spooning salt into her wound as foam tipped waves retreat we gorge ourselves on smouldering heat and full lipped sweetness. 3thoughts
--ddw
06/30

your balls slap my ass while the microwave beeps.. three cheers for prose
--re
06/28

Brilliant. I think I just had a meltdown. It's refreshing to see hot words written from what would be MY point of view. We all need more HOT lunches, twice a day.
--BAM
06/23

MAY I HAVE SECONDS AND THIRDS PLEASE!!!!
--DCH
06/14

Wonderful. Perfect. HOT.
--CS
06/11

Cuz good sex always leaves you hungrier for more. MORE!!! Yes.
--ben
06/10

As a bit of porn, this works well; it has the familiar language: balls slapping against an ass; cum trickling down a leg. But this language works against the poem. Not sure the poet thought the images through; why is the narrator starved after her "hot lunch?" Not very filling?
--bb
06/10

This rocks. An erotic, evocative feast of words. The best hot poem I've read in years.
--DL
05/31

A sensual,erotic fantasy fulfilled. Can you breath, my Princess? I know you cannot. You are overwhelmed by the most wicked of Thoughts, on fire with carnal ravage...Mmmm....loved this peice!!
--Enk.
05/29

melikeyverymuchy-nolunchy-likedrippyone...
--mws
05/11

Well done. Dripping,...yes. Chris
--CH
05/09

Nourishing yet it makes me hungry still
--dd
05/05

It was "Hot & Sexy"... What's the silverware for..she asks Time for bed my Dear...Lets eat out!
--Mr
05/05

"Hold the Mayo"..um,um..
--MyWa
05/05

Hot Sexy. Just the kind of lunch I like
--MT
05/03

Hot Sexy. Just the kind of lunch I like
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05/03

hot...erotic...makes me want to come home for lunch more often. Deliciously devious.
--kdn
05/01

ho hum? after reading this poem i called my girlfriend to get home from work. immediately. great fuckin poem.--boston jayson
--JJ
05/01

ho hum
--PEA
05/01

Well written. Makes me hungry.
--jrc
04/30

Great Poem Carissa. So hot, so spicy, this poem. Can I have some more? shane
--sa
04/30

That was...good, very good. For the briefest moment, I felt like I was there. Maybe we need a siesta tradition too.
--JS
04/30

OH YAH!!!!....excellent poem...
--obp
04/30

Incredible last sentence - great piece, hot and fast, like the lunchtime quickie! Thanks.
--GH
04/30

delectable
--ay
04/30

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