I wish Daphne could be my dirty lil coke ho.
I pretty much lost interest in the whole thing after the first
paragraph, but gained interest when I saw the picture of sweet lil Daphne at the bottom.
--ZxZ
06/25 |
wow...incredibly lyrical, incredibly exhilerating...my heart's actually racing...wow...
--KEM
06/12 |
more like this!
more like this!
daphne gottlieb is amazing, and we wants to see more of her work, please.
thank you.
--srh
06/03 |
There's a wonderful, almost operatic arc to this poem. The repetitions and the accumulation of declarations build wonderfully and powerfully to the end.
Great work, Daphne.
--dne
06/02 |
daphne rocks. she shines.
give her a fucking cookie already, christ!
really.
--NV
05/29 |
wow wow. so hard to read (in that good way), especially the "i hurt you" section. oof.
--em
05/29 |
The world's worst coke whore buys the coke and fucks you anyway. I mean, I've read about stuff like that.
great line.
--lw
05/29 |
strong work.
enjoyed the repetition. (normally, I don't)
--ek
05/29 |
this was gut-wrenching and beautiful
--cr
05/29 |
eh.
--md
05/28 |
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