wow
[exhale]
can i drive now?
--mjs
02/07 |
"You're a car door, little girl."
Gold baby... pure fucking Gold
--dj
10/16 |
hello fairy...
chrystie its all for u...
yours loving...
zeeshan
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09/16 |
Huh?
--ljb
09/02 |
didn't like it, sorry, I've written better
--lb
08/24 |
a very impresive artistic view...I like it
--Bleu
08/24 |
Yeah...Drive
/hbg
--hbg
08/19 |
surpisingly enough this felt like "a male version" of the poem. there was no counterpart to the writing; you see how
"she feels" as if it was left out the poem. The central woman to this poem had belongings of her own, and that is what the reader is left with. That's how come it feels like the male version of this poem as is!
--twm
08/15 |
Just because it is August and everyone wants to be on vacation like the French does not mean we should have succumb to vacant poetry.
The visual metaphor is strong but the body of the poem is not willing.
--plk
08/15 |
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