When drunks come home.....the new Poetry Corner of the 21st Century.
--MG
04/28 |
There is a remarkable humor at first reading these three sections... each is independent and can stand on its own. With further reading though, I find some of the devices, such as voice/character and transitioning is seemingly natural and not forced. Pafunda's voice is charming, deliberately devious, and so casual it hardly seems like trying. Yet, only with a practiced hand and/or utter natural talent can a writer achieve both a poetic gravity and lightheartedness all in a few lines. I am this coming year's editor for the MOSAIC, one of the longest running literary publications in California. Im Albacetefire, for more information. I would love to communicate with Danielle, as she would be a featured writer.
--AEOH
08/09 |
Very good .
--th
07/28 |
Groove, rhythm, choice cadence!
--cc
07/10 |
Nice. Good imagery. Fleeting, the way I see things in my mind's eye.
--Klär
06/11 |
"For safer sex, I put a tissue over the receiver
when you call."
That line is a total keeper!
--P-L
06/07 |
I'm *sure* I'm in love! Thank you for your wonderful wordcraft, Danielle. Call me.
--GWS
05/05 |
Great. Just great. Deep feelings + punk is a wonderful mixture.
--BB
05/02 |
i think im in love
--jh
04/27 |
short and sweet...the imagery captured by your use of lanuage in enviable.
--sh
04/25 |
What great lines - "tissue over the receiver," birds with hollow bones - thank you for the short and the sweet of it; a great way to start the day.
--cgh
04/25 |
snore
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04/25 |
I think that was great and clever.
--OLT
04/24 |
Very nicely written.. A good juxtaposition of ideas and thoughts that took me on a journey.
keep the good work up :)
--JE
04/23 |
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