My, she's gorgeous.
Anyone heard that Springsteen song Red Headed Woman and know which album it's on?
--cb
09/21 |
fantastic idea and hot photos, but I agree that you could do even more with this if you play with the text more.
an erotic story with accompanying photos rather then photos with accompanying erotic comments?
either way, hot!
--tp
09/09 |
i love the nerve date, but, i agree, more text to accompany the photos would be good.
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09/07 |
Madison is smoldering.
--ted
09/07 |
very sexy and cool, you are onto something.
--ppt
09/07 |
Dear Nerve,
I like this idea of the Nerve Date. The concept of erotic photo stories is a good one. What you've done so far though really isn't working. The design is weak and the comic book story telling doesn't add anything to the images or narrative. Essentially you have a bunch of redundant images and a few teaser lines - that's not a story. Try rethinking this and actually using images and a few words to tell the stories of these dates.
--mdw
09/07 |
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