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March 22, 2011
My First Time
Illustration by Thomas Pitilli
Female • 25 • Los Alcarrizos, Dominican Republic
We met one night at a car wash — which, in the D.R., is really a car wash by day and an open-air dancehall by night, with bachata music blaring from six-foot speakers and ice-cold Presidente crowding the plastic tabletops. He asked me to dance and we stayed on the floor all night, shamelessly grinding and making out.
He had beautiful sable-toned hair; he was tall and lean with a huge white smile and smooth skin. His name was Argenis. I was a volunteer living with nuns, so sex was definitely off limits in my house, and discouraged in general. He would pick me up at the end of the block and we'd ride into the city on his motorbike and dance the night away. One afternoon, I snuck off to his house, roosters and street dogs fighting for space on the dusty road. His mother and his little brother and sister were hanging out on the couch. They were pretty amused by this tall gringa with her questionable Spanish that Argenis had brought home.
We met one night at a car wash — which, in the D.R., is really a car wash by day and an open-air dancehall by night.
He brought me into his room and undressed me head to toe. He pulled his shorts off to reveal the largest and most handsome penis I have seen to this day. I blessed myself and laid back on the bed. Wow, did it hurt the first couple of times. He had boundless energy and a mouth like an octopus. The song playing in the background was "Mi Primavera" by the salsero Michel, one of my favorite songs to this day.
He was sweet and lots of fun and I kept going back for more. We would romp around his room for hours and then play dominoes and drink Coca-Cola in the hot afternoon sun. I loved my little secret affair and loved my sore thighs on the back of his motorbike as he drove me back to the nuns' house. For the first time in my life, I felt like such a dirty, sexy woman.
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We became friends right from the start. We found that we had the same cynical and sexual sense of humor.
"I can't tell you how glad I am that I never signed that 'True Love Waits' pledge."
"I had never planned to lose my virginity to a guy—let alone Rob. I planned to pretend to be straight for as long as possible."
Commentarium (100 Comments)
This is the best one I've read, I wish it were longer. A+!
But like, FAKE, man
I don't know about the story, but the drawing is very nice.
Don't try wearing a dress like the one in the drawing on a motorbike at home! :-) Otherwise both a good drawing and story!
I actually don't like the drawing this week. Usually they are less detailed in the backgrounds and more focused on the people in a given emotional moment, which makes them more intense. This one is fun but it has no soul.
My favorite story so far, short and sweet. One of my favorite drawings too.
I agree with LL: good story, but wished it were a bit longer. Also, I'm glad to see a story about someone who was in their 20's like I was. I know everyone follows a different path, but it can be a bit daunting knowing your potential partner could have almost a decade of experience than you.
Octupi have beaks for mouths. I'm sorry you had to experience that.
this is the best comment ever. I cannot stop laughing & I really wish there was an octopus in the drawing!
Agreed. Hilarious. Cracking up.
It doesn’t sound great to me either, but I understand the fisherman’s wife dreams about it, so maybe it feels better than it sounds.
HAHAHAHAHA. I LOVED the octopus line. Note that she doesn't say he had a mouth like an octopus' mouth -- just a mouth like an octopus, which is probably referring to its tentacles :-)
fucking loved this one; i had a similar experience with the most recent guy I've slept with. love it when they're fun.
I don't really care for this story. Too fluffy and light and seems to have a certain romance novel feel to it.
The artwork is better than the story, which seems fake.
Aha! Finally the fake comment. You're slipping, Nerve commenters...
Which part makes you think it's not fake?
She is a volunteer living with nuns in the Dominican Republic?
His description? (beautiful sable-toned hair; he was tall and lean with a huge white smile and smooth skin)
Or his other description (...the largest and most handsome penis I have seen to this day. I blessed myself and laid back on the bed)
Or just the picturesque description of the streets in the DR?
What's up haters! This is my story, and it's all true. I waited til I was 25 to have sex...I guess by that point in my life I wanted it to be a bit more romantic than just flopping around in my stepdad's basement with some scrawny emo kid. Should I have included the part about the terrible UTI I got in the days following and how I had to go to some backwater clinic for fake antibiotics so the nuns wouldn't suspect anything? Or when his drunk-ass father groped me while telling me I needed to take his son back to the States with me? Or how about the day when Argenis introduced me to his evangelical 'culto' as his wife? I kept the pretty, left out the ugly.
I like everything: the story, the drawing, the octopus beak, your retort. Nerve normally leaves me with a horrible taste in my mouth. :)
and the fisherman's wife reference!
Mouth like an octopus?
Why do those who comment think that anyone would bother sending in a fake story? They're all anonymous i.e. the authors don't even get credit for them. What would be their motivation to write something fake?
I think it sounds fake to some people because this is the Dominican Republic, and not your typical american virginity story.
I dont know much about Domini-Repubs, but i've heard that they are a fierce and romantic and particularly sexy culture. Not known for being shy or conservative the majority of the time. Think of culture primarily influenced by love and music - and how emotionally variable a people like that would be.
I for one believe this story, and i like it too. Yes this story was short - but from the authors point of view - was there much else to say? Her first time was brilliant.
Brava
Yeah, but on nearly every post someone says it's fake. Either these people are joking or they haven't thought about how stupid it would be for an anonymous author to send in a fake story.
No more s***. All posts of this quailty from now on
I'm impressed! You've mgnaaed the almost impossible.
Thanks for recommending the "Primavera" song, i looked it up on Youtube. I find it a tad to nervous for a romantic time. Also thanks for posting the story and for the retort. I think you should have included the aftermath in the story, though. Anyway, thanks.
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