POETRY




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Commentarium (31 Comments)

Feb 21 01 - 1:47pm
kad

I really liked this poem; it's short and sweet. I thought it was very clever, amusing and meaningful.

Feb 21 01 - 7:15pm
THH

This is very nice...and here I thought all men want a girl to go down on him - whenever possible

Feb 22 01 - 1:18pm
AB

Thats pretty dumb...

Don't Go Down on Her

Because she can't write,
She takes things too seriously
Wouldn' care about you
Because you're a man.

Feb 22 01 - 5:53pm
MC

Oh c'mon. How long is everyone going to take this pretentious bulls**t?

Feb 24 01 - 9:13pm
FDR

The only thing we have to fear, is fear itself.

Feb 24 01 - 9:33pm
TM

The poem is excellent, it gives true voice to women who know what giving head really means.

Feb 25 01 - 11:17pm
dm

say what???????????

Mar 01 01 - 12:42am
MFB

me thinks someone is a jealous ex-boyfriend.

Mar 01 01 - 10:31pm
GB

As the one she went down on, I'm gonna have to disagree about the butterflies in the mouth thing. Just wasn't there...

Mar 02 01 - 6:22pm
jlk

Get over that shit you idiot, You obviously have never had anything good from that kind of experience and from all the people that have we are saying "Quit tryng to screw it up for us.

Mar 02 01 - 9:26pm
chu

A beautiful poem. Simple yet very powerful. Imagery that is both sexy and forlorn.
thankyou

Mar 05 01 - 2:21am
hn

I agree totally.

Mar 05 01 - 2:23am
hn

Women are beautifull creatures and should not do anything they are not comfortable with after all mine are great kissers!

Mar 07 01 - 2:56pm
LD

why not, why not, go south
go there
and when you're done
i'll kiss you where
your legs divide
and lick inside

Mar 13 01 - 9:39am
DJ

yah i mean woman thank that all men really want is a woman to go down on him yo some men are like that but not me i mean a girl goes down on me thank about it girls like it too a girl goes down on me i go down on her and also i think that that whoever wrote this is gay and would rather suck then be sucked and also they are a jelous ex boyfriend who got booted out on the side of da road,
c~~~~~ya

Mar 16 01 - 5:34pm
s.c.

How stupid. Chicks like it when you go down on them and guys like it when girls go down on them. I can't imagine that it could possilbly be worse for a girl to go down on a man than for a man to go down on a woman. I like getting blow jobs and I also like going down on chicks. If you don't like it then fine but keep your mouth shut. peace

Mar 17 01 - 11:48pm
AMA

Absolutely mind opening. Well put and visual. I loved it!

Mar 21 01 - 12:39pm
ss

All i have to say is... "This is the dumbest thing i have ever seen."

Mar 21 01 - 5:33pm
EM

Where's the rest of it?

Mar 27 01 - 1:31am
SB

I think the shortness of the poem gives it the edge it was looking for, it says all it needs to in the lines provided, i think it is very insightful and well written...i applude the author very much i loved it...it was wonderful..

..and for all those who say it's "where's the rest?" or it's "dumb?" then you're a very shallow person who needs everything spelled out for you...sorry it may be rude but it's true..

Mar 27 01 - 10:37pm
KM

A very touching poem.
He loves her - wants her for himself.
Nice work.

Mar 30 01 - 9:37pm

you don't know what you are missing

Mar 31 01 - 6:57am
P.

I'm ready to have this really poor poem absent now.

Apr 02 01 - 11:42am

This isn't really about getting head, now is it? MAybe more along the lines of the capability a woman has to make a man feel as good as in that situation with other things, maybe I'm reading into it, I dunno

Apr 02 01 - 2:02pm
RaT

Going down need not always symbolise bowing down to HIM, the way I see it is that the immense pleasure he gets gives a woman that much power over him, hey to each his own, so stop preaching!

Apr 02 01 - 6:57pm
mk

I will not listen to your crazy antadotes!

Apr 03 01 - 9:50am
s

that sucks

Apr 06 01 - 3:55am
WSW

Go South Young Woman

Apr 09 01 - 10:40am
tbs

i like it@!

May 09 01 - 4:24pm
a.l.

man....that poem was gay!! it didnt make any sense. whats up with that? when u come up with a better one send it to me. lata peace!

Feb 02 02 - 12:38am
DM

It is a very beautiful poem.

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