POETRY






Drive by Amy Newman      






1.



Drive, he said. Want to go for a drive?

That fat girl's watching me, my

every move.
My hips he said were like traffic lights.

Turning red red red. I wanted a light.

I crossed over to his

side. Try this bread.

Soft but rising.

The air makes him concentrate

on me, like I am a bowl and him

all fixed, all full and blind as yeast.



2.



Inviting blue out the car window. Nice enough

for a trespass into it

as if we were skating and sinking

against a bruise. He is skinny and hollow

like a kitchen knife stark against wood

and day-old cake. Moon spills out

over whatever we cross: water, gutter, pleasure.

This girl's no loaf of bread sliced

and empty. This girl's going to drive.



3.



You're a car door, little girl.

Place on his jeans kneaded clear through. Skin's

the color of dirt on a hot day, clear up to the wrist.

Tell a man's truth by his wrist, and a woman's

by her small finger.

I've got mine bent backwards,

is what it's at.

It's lonely to drive with him.



4.



A girl makes him quiet, he tries romantic.

The night moon tries itself again

in a knot, or stretches to the shape of a baby's fingernail

or a crescent roll on a table.

She's round as bread dough, his former driver.

She's rolling out her shorts

like she's rising. That fat girl keeps following me.

I'll stop that like a traffic light.

He couldn't find his way out from her car.

She'd drive all over the road.



5.



He means to start me. Light my haunches

like a cigarette. Make my table full of night planets,

finish up the dishes in the white evening water.

I tell him you're gonna melt like sweet rolls

on my warm tongue. We'll get this car

moving out over the road's open legs.

We'll run it out past what you know.

Didn't stop for the traffic light.

Just drive, he said.











©2000
Amy Newman and Nerve.com   




Commentarium (12 Comments)

Aug 15 00 - 2:40pm
plk

Just because it is August and everyone wants to be on vacation like the French does not mean we should have succumb to vacant poetry.

The visual metaphor is strong but the body of the poem is not willing.

Aug 15 00 - 9:41pm
twm

surpisingly enough this felt like "a male version" of the poem. there was no counterpart to the writing; you see how
"she feels" as if it was left out the poem. The central woman to this poem had belongings of her own, and that is what the reader is left with. That's how come it feels like the male version of this poem as is!

Aug 19 00 - 11:21am
hbg

Yeah...Drive

/hbg

Aug 24 00 - 10:33pm
Bleu

a very impresive artistic view...I like it

Aug 24 00 - 11:03pm
lb

didn't like it, sorry, I've written better

Sep 16 00 - 2:28pm

hello fairy...

chrystie its all for u...

yours loving...
zeeshan

Oct 16 00 - 5:20am
dj

"You're a car door, little girl."
Gold baby... pure fucking Gold

Feb 07 01 - 3:01am
mjs

wow

[exhale]

can i drive now?

Dec 02 11 - 6:24pm
MaeRoberson22

According to my own analysis, billions of persons in the world receive the mortgage loans from different creditors. Hence, there is good chances to receive a car loan in all countries.

Jan 19 12 - 9:40am
Kevin Landry

Here is a quick thought: dealing with unknown phone calls can annoying, right? I think we all can agree with that! Yet knowing a reverse cell phone look up directory is available to quickly obtain the name and address associated with those calls is a major comfort to many people.

Mar 26 12 - 4:09pm
ViperXXX

didn't like it, sorry, I've written better. forfait mobile - forfait sans engagement

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