POETRY



 



I'm not the first frustrated astronomer

staring farther than my corrected vision

can take me. Love not mine is better

than none. Two friends I can't save for a tryst

join me at the border where the tides

hiss and our heckling initially makes sense,

three craning necks, what's the couple

up to, who's on top, who will break free first.

See who seems to steer the narrow bars

holding up the stalled prow good enough for borrowing.

Then it's our own envy we see sharper than their pleasure —

as in the movies, we don't get to choose

the ending or topple the lovely when we want.

Like tenants emerging from a still-smoldering

building, clutching the rungs in reverse,

they come down to sand, these two — it rescues them

from falling backward; they brush off

their torn-wing garments in the capsule of light

that restores them to feature and color.

And not one of us will admit we've never done

anything that vulnerable.




© 2000 Michael Tyrell and Nerve.com, Inc.

Commentarium (8 Comments)

Jan 12 01 - 5:47pm
ts

Voyeurism and exhibitionism caught with their pants down-thanks for the vision!

May 27 02 - 11:29am
OBP

the best poem I've read in a long time on this board...MORE...MORE...MORE...!!!!!

Jun 03 02 - 2:07am

Vulnerability; vulnerable piece...

touching.

Thank you!

Chris

Jul 02 02 - 1:41am
J W

wow!, As one who dose little reading, a love soars high in my soul,a window now open ready to flow freely to the open sky. Caged no longer, free to feel all emotions, the storm is over. Set apart, time is a new start. Believing in pain there is no gain. Learning is no longer a game, a passion for words, never being heard. My heart now ready to speak, flow's freely for all eye's to see, I am so very near. Seek and one finds, look and you have found the book.

Aug 24 02 - 1:39am
oo

totally refreshing!! I have read my fair share of poems and nothing compares to all of Mr Tyrell's tragic yet insightful writings.

I look forward to seeing and hearing much more from this artist.

world, look out! another legend is on the horizon.

Sep 06 02 - 6:19pm
SJP

Haunting poem, interestingly realized premise. I've got to try out the lifeguard chair sometime!

Apr 28 03 - 1:14am
MG

All over the place like a mind wondering from the very sea-chair. I like it.

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