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I'm not the first frustrated astronomer
staring farther than my corrected vision
can take me. Love not mine is better
than none. Two friends I can't save for a tryst
join me at the border where the tides
hiss and our heckling initially makes sense,
three craning necks, what's the couple
up to, who's on top, who will break free first.
See who seems to steer the narrow bars
holding up the stalled prow good enough for borrowing.
Then it's our own envy we see sharper than their pleasure
as in the movies, we don't get to choose
the ending or topple the lovely when we want.
Like tenants emerging from a still-smoldering
building, clutching the rungs in reverse,
they come down to sand, these two it rescues them
from falling backward; they brush off
their torn-wing garments in the capsule of light
that restores them to feature and color.
And not one of us will admit we've never done
anything that vulnerable.
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Commentarium (8 Comments)
Voyeurism and exhibitionism caught with their pants down-thanks for the vision!
the best poem I've read in a long time on this board...MORE...MORE...MORE...!!!!!
LOVE IT
Vulnerability; vulnerable piece...
touching.
Thank you!
Chris
wow!, As one who dose little reading, a love soars high in my soul,a window now open ready to flow freely to the open sky. Caged no longer, free to feel all emotions, the storm is over. Set apart, time is a new start. Believing in pain there is no gain. Learning is no longer a game, a passion for words, never being heard. My heart now ready to speak, flow's freely for all eye's to see, I am so very near. Seek and one finds, look and you have found the book.
totally refreshing!! I have read my fair share of poems and nothing compares to all of Mr Tyrell's tragic yet insightful writings.
I look forward to seeing and hearing much more from this artist.
world, look out! another legend is on the horizon.
Haunting poem, interestingly realized premise. I've got to try out the lifeguard chair sometime!
All over the place like a mind wondering from the very sea-chair. I like it.
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