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March 28, 2001
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Anticipates delight of has tea with reads French with Uneasiness of discourages afraid of rival for discusses religion and love with Disregards world's opinion of sees every day in kisses chest of Consummation with declares passion for agrees to meet Wednesdays at Resolves to maintain affection for promises support if glazed eyes of Interrupted in railed against remembered as image: François Boucher's "Girl Raising Her Skirt"
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Commentarium (5 Comments)
a fucking amazing poem. beautiful.
Dear Nerve,
I love the way you've presented the poem--the graphic works perfectly with the text, the fonts are appropriate and the whole thing is DAIQUIRI.
a great little poem. let's have more from this guy. apr
like the but
Oh, I enjoyed it much much more after I (a) looked up the word "precis" and (b) realized the poem has absolutely nothing to do with "Courtney Love", the pop icon - ( I was reading it as some bizzarre social commentary and trying really hard to cop on)
At any rate,.,., I loved the flow........ I love the phrases
Excellent work, I don't feel like I wasted my time at all - Thank you!
Now you say something