This week: Madison treats us to ice cream (and more)
Madison took her time responding to our email. When we finally met, on a hot summer afternoon, we learned that her interests include wine, art, politics, and being photographed by Samantha Wolov increasingly naked in her apartment. — Nerve
"I'm the flirtin this summer heat.I picked you up."
"I started getting hungry for something that the ice cream just couldn't satiate. So I took you for a walk back to my house where we could both geta little more comfortable."
I like this idea of the Nerve Date. The concept of erotic photo stories is a good one. What you've done so far though really isn't working. The design is weak and the comic book story telling doesn't add anything to the images or narrative. Essentially you have a bunch of redundant images and a few teaser lines - that's not a story. Try rethinking this and actually using images and a few words to tell the stories of these dates.
fantastic idea and hot photos, but I agree that you could do even more with this if you play with the text more.
an erotic story with accompanying photos rather then photos with accompanying erotic comments?
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Dear Nerve,
I like this idea of the Nerve Date. The concept of erotic photo stories is a good one. What you've done so far though really isn't working. The design is weak and the comic book story telling doesn't add anything to the images or narrative. Essentially you have a bunch of redundant images and a few teaser lines - that's not a story. Try rethinking this and actually using images and a few words to tell the stories of these dates.
very sexy and cool, you are onto something.
Madison is smoldering.
i love the nerve date, but, i agree, more text to accompany the photos would be good.
fantastic idea and hot photos, but I agree that you could do even more with this if you play with the text more.
an erotic story with accompanying photos rather then photos with accompanying erotic comments?
either way, hot!
My, she's gorgeous.
Anyone heard that Springsteen song Red Headed Woman and know which album it's on?
Now you say something