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Reader Feedback on "A Night Out With Melissa P."

Sorry, I must agree with the other correspondents. It all sounds so contrived that I doubt it took place, sounds more like a fantasy. And 'my secret' sounds like the way a child might describe their gentials. She has a lot of growing up to do and it sounded from the extract that the guys weren't wearing rubbers. There is more to eroticism than letting yourself be humilated, she didn't even sound like she enjoyed the experience.
--JT
10/10
Pity... I was looking forward to reading the book in Italian on belle du jour's recommendation, but this drivel won't sound any better in the original, I'm afraid. Harlequin romances occasionally have some surprisingly effective and arousing language or situations, so don't insult the imprint by comparing those books with this mess.
--YK
10/09
What a story it sounds like a nightmare group rape. What is the moral of the story ? She did not even take a shower in order to wash off all that cum from her body. Surprised she did not examine her vagina for bruises. Bad, real bad essay.
--am
10/04
this is such crap. it doesn't even border on erotic. her style is cramped and silly, a childish experiment with a genre that trickles out little more than harlequin garbage.
--mh
10/04
Perhaps something was lost in translation, but this sounded really... trite, cliched, and uninteresting. Seriously, if it weren't for the age and sex of the writer, I don't think it would be causing any sensation at all, and frankly, I've seen better teenage drivel...
--DAD
10/04
that was silly. is this a parody on bad erotica? so ridiculous.
--mo
10/04
Her "Secret?" Her "wound?" God that was bad. If there's really such a person as Melissa P, could she please stop ripping off the Story of O and learn to write like a real teenager?
--jmb
10/04
I'm sorry to say this is among the worst porn I've ever read. It is laughably bad. No one in the real world speaks like that, particularly no sixteen year old I've ever met. You guys can, and have, done a lot better than this.
--REM
10/04
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